Discussion: Mercanaries of Wander Yard

Lets try something different with this story. Each person that writes writes about their own character and we tell a a comprehensive story from multiple points of view.

Note: Wander Yard is the name of a planet. The Jandii {Jon-DEE} is the race that's at war with the humans.

No more Natalie?

Ms. Flores is still going to get her fan service.

It might be a little tough to work on two stories, for me at least.

I believe in you.

HAHAAAHHAAA!!

Bump!

...Bump

I like that the story is starting to go somewhere I just need someone else to post and I'll be right back on this.

The skies never looked so out of place.... (ill leave the rest to you guys)

Wandering Omen wrote:The skies never looked so out of place.... (ill leave the rest to you guys)

I meant someone needs to write another part to the Wander Yard story...

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

Wandering Omen wrote:The skies never looked so out of place.... (ill leave the rest to you guys)

I meant someone needs to write another part to the Wander Yard story...

... my soul noooooooooo. you got it i will be reading. maybe shoo,cam, and chad should get on that.

When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

The Bubbling Dark wrote:When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

if i has skills to write, i would comment and continue, but i dont have that skill and im not going to embarass myself....

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

if i has skills to write, i would comment and continue, but i dont have that skill and im not going to embarass myself....

Dude, I've read some of your backgrounds when you've applied yourself and a good bit of it was good stuff. Plus it isn't a matter of who's better its about us telling a story bit by bit as a team.

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

if i has skills to write, i would comment and continue, but i dont have that skill and im not going to embarass myself....

Dude, I've read some of your backgrounds when you've applied yourself and a good bit of it was good stuff. Plus it isn't a matter of who's better its about us telling a story bit by bit as a team.

i dont like you wisdom it makes me want to fall into your trap....

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

if i has skills to write, i would comment and continue, but i dont have that skill and im not going to embarass myself....

Dude, I've read some of your backgrounds when you've applied yourself and a good bit of it was good stuff. Plus it isn't a matter of who's better its about us telling a story bit by bit as a team.

i dont like you wisdom it makes me want to fall into your trap....

Me: Write
You: No!
Me: Write
You: No... maybe
Me: Dude, just write
To be Continued

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

Wandering Omen wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:When is someone going to pick this up? Pat, you might be the only one that hasn't posted a story portion. Tag, bro, you're it!

if i has skills to write, i would comment and continue, but i dont have that skill and im not going to embarass myself....

Dude, I've read some of your backgrounds when you've applied yourself and a good bit of it was good stuff. Plus it isn't a matter of who's better its about us telling a story bit by bit as a team.

i dont like you wisdom it makes me want to fall into your trap....

Me: Write
You: No!
Me: Write
You: No... maybe
Me: Dude, just write
To be Continued

sadly enough these last 20 min i came up with one line its not going to work. but you have the ability. i like to read your stuff its entertaining as hell. so ill wait for your next story.

I've reached the 100th page mark on my story The Count of Castle Rock and I feel like I can and need to finish it. If I have a bout of writing inspiration I'll post but I want the you to write a part. Read Wander Yard, play Halo, write a section.

*Rob Schneider voice* You can do it!

PAT, PAT, pat, paaaat!!!!

You can do it!!!

Yikes, Pat, you not only gave it a shot after swearing that you wouldn't but you actually did a good job. My only criticism was that it was too short. Just as you piqued my interest it was over! Good Job. Wait for someone else to continue this Space War Drama and then continue, please.

Now it goes to question: Mankind has found life in space and, as our nature dictates, have gone to war with them. We have fought the Jandii to have learned as many ways to kill them as they know to kill us. We know the enemy. So who are these new threats and what are they doing with our bodies?

Great story guys we need to keep this up.

the only question who will write next...excited to get my turn

Guess it's you Talis.

Good job Pat.

ill stab him.

Nice, someone finally wrote about the other side.