Discussion: Avalon Evolved

Admin can you plz move all the comments not apart of the story to this topic so its easier to read. And dont worry Talis im working on my part, its just hard because we dont really have a clear background of the story. Now since it being circle jerk story do we have the freedom to use other peoples characters and define certain parts of the world and its history??

ofcourse flush out the world and characters as much as u want its open to u guys how much you bring to table whether your chapter be a small tidbit or an epic its what you want to give to the story to enhance its pull on the reader and writers alike...

OK for the next writer we have
Talk of alot of Prophecy
War on the Horizen
and a child psypher who battles her brother daily for supremacy within her own body because his ID lives within her...
Is she the child of prophecy to bring about to restore Asure on New Tera.
Azure btw is a catalyst for psychonetic power, breif exposure to the substance would drastically increase overall PSylock abilities.

So azure is it like a worldwide phenomenon that affects everyone differently or is like something done in a lab?

I feel a building inspiration... This is going to be fun!

I had thought that it was a rare gem or substance deep within the earth, but thoughts of it being man made could definitely have a foundation in the world aswell...But what i kno for certain is that its no longer on New Tera and Psylocks have become desperate for means of expanding their own ID, and acheiving a greater sychronization point with their own ego.

Prophecy states that we are all blessed by Asha, within our soul lay his gift unto us, A sprite of his power, Asure.

Bump

This was a good one....Bump

Who's turn is it? I'm tempted to post again but I think that's against the rules...

go ahead bro ill go after, it was shoo but i dont think hes gonna ever get around to it...

Couldn't help myself. I got tired of waiting for someone else to post.... Shit I might post again within the week. Where are Talis and Cambira? This is a great story and I want you guys in on this. Magi, do your thing. I'll try to wait this time.

oh my god, did anyone else read the latest installment of the super awsome story? it was soo good.

The MAGI wrote:oh my god, did anyone else read the latest installment of the super awsome story? it was soo good.

No need for sarcasm. I kind of rushed... didn't really bother to get the color scheme organized but it just flowed out of me. I want to wait for someone else to post but I've started to flesh out the world and I have plans for Lutin and his father, Emperor Basilisk as well as the brothers Moses and Ramey. It all ties into the war and the prophecy. Ideas, ideas, ideas.

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

The MAGI wrote:oh my god, did anyone else read the latest installment of the super awsome story? it was soo good.

No need for sarcasm. I kind of rushed... didn't really bother to get the color scheme organized but it just flowed out of me. I want to wait for someone else to post but I've started to flesh out the world and I have plans for Lutin and his father, Emperor Basilisk as well as the brothers Moses and Ramey. It all ties into the war and the prophecy. Ideas, ideas, ideas.

I want to write something but because i cant wrap my mind around it properly im most likely going to write about some normal people while this is going on.

The MAGI wrote:

The Bubbling Dark wrote:

The MAGI wrote:oh my god, did anyone else read the latest installment of the super awsome story? it was soo good.

No need for sarcasm. I kind of rushed... didn't really bother to get the color scheme organized but it just flowed out of me. I want to wait for someone else to post but I've started to flesh out the world and I have plans for Lutin and his father, Emperor Basilisk as well as the brothers Moses and Ramey. It all ties into the war and the prophecy. Ideas, ideas, ideas.

I want to write something but because i cant wrap my mind around it properly im most likely going to write about some normal people while this is going on.

My chapter had a normal guy, Alberto, you can tell the story without focusing on more psylocks. It the tale was action, action, and more action all day it would lose its interest. Normal people have a story to tell too. What does a shop keeper think when two demi-gods smash his home to dust as they attempt to take each others Id? Make it happen. Writing is an exercise of your imagination and like with any exercise you get stronger every time you do it.

This is crazy cuz i just started running a campaign based on this story like 2 weeks ago on my ship...I got NEXT!!!! Have to read the updates...dont get a chance to hop on this site much...

Talis, what's The Prince's name? I want to post a list of characters so that writers can keep up with the massive cast we are creating but I don't think you named him. Is he just "the Prince" or "Sword Prince" (I see what you did there).

Youll see

Not at the rate that you guys post.

I agree fuck that magi bitch ass wanna be tony, in fact comparing you to tony is just an insult to tony, so to tony I apologize for comparing you to that pussy ass unibrow wearing cat piss smelling ex member of team satisfaction, that's right bitch you just been kicked off the team fuck you and your problems talking about you come here to hang out with us to get away from your real life problems but because we ain't entertaining you enough you gonna bitch out and stop chilling with us. god damn how's it feel to have your period once a week every Tuesday bitch. just throw some toilet paper in that front butt of yours stop the bleeding and get your ass down to kings games bitch and maybe just maybe ill let you SUCK ON MY BALLS to get back into team satisfaction. lets see how clean you make them first, ill even shave the left nut just for you I know how much you like my left nut https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_bounce.gif

Random wrote:I agree fuck that magi bitch ass wanna be tony, in fact comparing you to tony is just an insult to tony, so to tony I apologize for comparing you to that pussy ass unibrow wearing cat piss smelling ex member of team satisfaction, that's right bitch you just been kicked off the team fuck you and your problems talking about you come here to hang out with us to get away from your real life problems but because we ain't entertaining you enough you gonna bitch out and stop chilling with us. god damn how's it feel to have your period once a week every Tuesday bitch. just throw some toilet paper in that front butt of yours stop the bleeding and get your ass down to kings games bitch and maybe just maybe ill let you SUCK ON MY BALLS to get back into team satisfaction. lets see how clean you make them first, ill even shave the left nut just for you I know how much you like my left nut https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_bounce.gif

Im starting to think he is making sure that i see this message. i hope you see all of mine.

Who's working on the next post? I don't want to feel like i took over, Lem Style...

You're the writer of this group buddy. That's the way the spell check corrects.

i wanted to but then my attention span gave up and now i dont know what to do with this any more. im probably going to write something else, the story is to hard to follow up on, after your epic shorts.

This world we've created is so vast that there is plenty of room for everyone's creativity. Someone give it a shot, a real effort. We believe in you.